Breathtaking Gold
Posted in Watches on 06/14/2009 01:23 pm by adminWhat do you think about this poem? Constructive criticism please...?
The dawn shifted,
vibrant shades of indigo
turned violent. Warring colors
bled out across, beyond interpretation.
Silent battlefield.
Leaves scatter shattered
memories, blanket the ground,
crackle underfoot. Clouds
crease, expand, meld into new molds-
Oblivious
Sunlight knifes across
red canyons as shadows dance
bewildered. Ribbons of gold;
streams thus transformed, rich
amongst the wreckage. The
beautiful ruins recreated.
Fragile forms coalesce, collide;
destruction at its most
breathtaking.
Spectres flow amid gossamer
dewdrop studded glimmer-globes,
glow and drip then
drop. All the world a heartbeat.
Pulse and stop.
Colors melt to velvet ebony,
dusted with galaxies.
Galactic deaths, unfathomable.
Treasures unreachable.
Lessons unteachable.
Glory all but glimpsed at its best...
Sunrest.
Heh...forgot to add the title; Sunrest. It's a poem about sunsets, the day's closing minutes.
it's a beauty to see life.......
........when seen from......
...the clashing colors of light........
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